An exciting, defining summer ahead

[Lucky Toma]

I've written something for Unibet on why this is going to be a stormy - but ultimately defining - summer of transfer activity. Anything you disagree with?


http://bet.unibet.co.uk/football/pr...otional-transfer-storm-coming-man-city-summer

 

[talkativesprout]

A kettle makes a clunk when placed on a stove, it is the boiling water vapour that hisses....Pffft The Sun awaits you ;)




Good article mate, wets the tastebuds :)

 

[aguero93:20]

I've written something for Unibet on why this is going to be a stormy - but ultimately defining - summer of transfer activity. Anything you disagree with?


http://bet.unibet.co.uk/football/pr...otional-transfer-storm-coming-man-city-summer

I thought the very end;

Make no mistake about it, a storm is coming. A defining summer to facilitate a defining era. There will be upheaval both expensive and emotional and all for the greater good.

Enjoy the calm while you can.

Could have used a comma:

Make no mistake about it, a storm is coming. A defining summer to facilitate a defining era. There will be upheaval, both expensive and emotional and all for the greater good.

Enjoy the calm while you can.

Apart from that it was good...

 

[Armaan]

Let's not pretend like we weren't saying the same thing last summer lol.

 

[domalino]

I thought the very end;


Could have used a comma:



Apart from that it was good...

Should there not be a second comma?

There will be upheaval, both expensive and emotional, and all for the greater good.

 

[aguero93:20]

Should there not be a second comma?

Not with 'and' after it. You could phrase it like this;

Make no mistake about it, a storm is coming. A defining summer to facilitate a defining era. There will be upheaval, both expensive and emotional, all for the greater good.

Enjoy the calm while you can.

 

[CharliesRightPeg]

Nice article

 

[Ladybarn Blue .]

Not with 'and' after it. You could phrase it like this;

Very good , well said .

 

[Ladybarn Blue .]

Not with 'and' after it. You could phrase it like this;

Well said .

 

[Uwe Already]

You missed this bit at the end:

So take it, you raggy bastards!