My track, feedback?

[Miami Weiss]

Progressive House/Trance, "I Can't Hack It"

Please Listen: <a class="postlink" href="http://www51.zippyshare.com/v/91669023/file.html" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;">http://www51.zippyshare.com/v/91669023/file.html</a>

 

[Stevies Bald Head!]

Is this your first track? if so good effort.

Try to cut down on the filtering and phaser, the foundation of the tune has a nice rythem so no need to mash it up with effects.

The first beat you got going on is lovely. You have massive room for edit within that track, maybe a build up leaving it to progressivly slide back into that starting rythem alone would sound nice.

 

[Miami Weiss]

Is this your first track? if so good effort.

Try to cut down on the filtering and phaser, the foundation of the tune has a nice rythem so no need to mash it up with effects.

The first beat you got going on is lovely. You have massive room for edit within that track, maybe a build up leaving it to progressivly slide back into that starting rythem alone would sound nice.

Well my first "finished/mastered" one if you like.
I knew I overdid it, need some new VST's

Cheers mate!

 

[ali benarbia's studs]

it s cool!!!!

(don t know why i expected to hear a voiceover of chris martin singing if i ruled the world)*

*i m just a weirdo!

good work keep cracking!!!!

 

[leighton]

Miami not too bad mate. I feel it is a bit too long would be my concern but fair play to you. You could be the next Mark McKabe.

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5F8V7Vx1fn0[/youtube]

Can you remember that tune..........

 

[Biggsy1]

Progressive House/Trance, "I Can't Hack It"

Please Listen: <a class="postlink" href="http://www51.zippyshare.com/v/91669023/file.html" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;">http://www51.zippyshare.com/v/91669023/file.html</a>

Fair Play MW good stuff!

 

[Stevies Bald Head!]

trance/progressive is a difficult genre of music to make it work. There is a selected kind of pattern that the music has to follow.

Get posting that tune on Dj's pages and what not.....

 

[Miami Weiss]

Thanks a lot guys, Currently remixing "Eric Pyrdz - Pjanoo"

Electro House, not for everyone's taste: <a class="postlink" href="http://www26.zippyshare.com/v/50343489/file.html" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;">http://www26.zippyshare.com/v/50343489/file.html</a>
Feedback would be great.

Cheers.

 

[ali benarbia's studs]

Thanks a lot guys, Currently remixing "Eric Pyrdz - Pjanoo"

Electro House, not for everyone's taste: <a class="postlink" href="http://www26.zippyshare.com/v/50343489/file.html" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;">http://www26.zippyshare.com/v/50343489/file.html</a>
Feedback would be great.

Cheers.

sounds cool...can you sidechain some heavy beats to it in the middle???
thought it was cool....maybe even brake the beats to make it kind of stutter so to speak.... then bring it back to what it was. keep up the good work

 

[leighton]

I like the second 1 better than the first. Now I am in my late 20s if it is dance music it has to be a bit more chilled out than anything else. Try mixing a song thats out now and putting your slant on it. How long are you doing music.