Student film (comments please)

[Blue_Jonny]

<a class="postlink" href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S8P_fN5A4Ok" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S8P_fN5A4Ok</a>

I made this in college, can i have feedback please both positive and negative. Cheers.

 

[tueartsboots]

What were you trying to do?
Be a spoof BTTF? which would be fine but it didn't work for me.
Your Prof was too obviously over the top.
The young students had something.
What was with all the blackness at the end?
No proper structure.
Start, middle, end?????

I watch short films all the time - along with showreels - and this would not pass muster. Sorry but my professional opinion is that whilst I think you should do stuff and increase you knowledge of making films, being part of filmmaking, this doesn't attract my attention as something worth "investing" in.

Keep going and you will eventually find out whether you can or you can't.

Best of luck
Mrs TB
(Agent)

 

[Fame Monster]

What were you trying to do?
Be a spoof BTTF? which would be fine but it didn't work for me.
Your Prof was too obviously over the top.
The young students had something.
What was with all the blackness at the end?
No proper structure.
Start, middle, end?????

I watch short films all the time - along with showreels - and this would not pass muster. Sorry but my professional opinion is that whilst I think you should do stuff and increase you knowledge of making films, being part of filmmaking, this doesn't attract my attention as something worth "investing" in.

Keep going and you will eventually find out whether you can or you can't.

Best of luck
Mrs TB
(Agent)

Post us your tits.

 

[tueartsboots]

What were you trying to do?
Be a spoof BTTF? which would be fine but it didn't work for me.
Your Prof was too obviously over the top.
The young students had something.
What was with all the blackness at the end?
No proper structure.
Start, middle, end?????

I watch short films all the time - along with showreels - and this would not pass muster. Sorry but my professional opinion is that whilst I think you should do stuff and increase you knowledge of making films, being part of filmmaking, this doesn't attract my attention as something worth "investing" in.

Keep going and you will eventually find out whether you can or you can't.

Best of luck
Mrs TB
(Agent)

Post us your tits.

 

[Fame Monster]

What sort of picture is that?
It just didn't work for me. Being in the business, I know that it's essential to flaunt them.
And the photography was woeful (without even mentioning the lighting).
And £6 for bloody casserole? Madness.
Also, the photo lacked symmetry.

If you want to post a nude one, feel free.

All the best.
nashark
(Breast inspector)

 

[tueartsboots]

What sort of picture is that?
It just didn't work for me. Being in the business, I know that it's essential to flaunt them.
And the photography was woeful (without even mentioning the lighting).
And £6 for bloody casserole? Madness.
Also, the photo lacked symmetry.

If you want to post a nude one, feel free.

All the best.
nashark
(Breast inspector)

I know your trying to be funny but my missus answered the OP, she is a theatrical agent based in West Kensington, London. The firm is called Caroline Dawson Associates. CDA.
When it comes to young film makers she shows a BIG interest, we need to help uk film makers

 

[Fame Monster]

What sort of picture is that?
It just didn't work for me. Being in the business, I know that it's essential to flaunt them.
And the photography was woeful (without even mentioning the lighting).
And £6 for bloody casserole? Madness.
Also, the photo lacked symmetry.

If you want to post a nude one, feel free.

All the best.
nashark
(Breast inspector)

I know your trying to be funny but my missus answered the OP, she is a theatrical agent based in West Kensington, London. The firm is called Caroline Dawson Associates. CDA.
When it comes to young film makers she shows a BIG interest, we need to help uk film makers

I tried and failed.

The film was shite btw. She could have said "there's no hope for you, young man. At least you tried. Don't spend any more time on it."

 

[DannyBoy2890]

i love back to the future

 

[tueartsboots]

I know your trying to be funny but my missus answered the OP, she is a theatrical agent based in West Kensington, London. The firm is called Caroline Dawson Associates. CDA.
When it comes to young film makers she shows a BIG interest, we need to help uk film makers

I tried and failed.

The film was shite btw. She could have said "there's no hope for you, young man. At least you tried. Don't spend any more time on it."

It wasn't shite, believe me- I've seen far worse
He got a professional review, for free !

 

[Blue_Jonny]

suprisingly it got 100% though ;)