Need help with a song - Stephen Ireland's Angel Wings

[Cambridgeblue]

I'm trying to write a new version of niall quinn's disco pants and could do with some help... this is what I've got so far:

Stephen Ireland's angel wings are the best
They go up from his arse past his chest
They're way better than a million other things
Stephen ireland's angel wings!

constructive comments appreciated

CB

 

[King Of The Kippax]

Goo effort, Bit of creativity i like it

 

[Blue bob]

how about to the tune of MrMr's Broken wings

(original)

Take these broken wings
And learn to fly again
And learn to live so free
And when we hear the voices sing
The book of love will open up
And let us in
Take these broken wings

Ireland Version

Ireland has angel wings,
he'll score for us again
and learn to play so free
and when we hear the voices sing
the top 4 will open up
and let us in
Stevie has angel wings


a couple of those lines could be improved

 

[flapjack]

I'm trying to write a new version of niall quinn's disco pants and could do with some help... this is what I've got so far:

Stephen Ireland's angel wings are the best
They go up from his arse past his chest
They're way better than a million other things
Stephen ireland's angel wings!

constructive comments appreciated

CB

how about:

Stephen Ireland's angel wings are the best
They go up from his arse past his chest
They are way better than the Ting Tings
Stephen ireland's angel wings!