horlock
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It's pretty good that, enjoyed it. Do you write alot? I've just recently got into poetry not so long ago so i'm a bit of a rookie.
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Rondeaux Poems...
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Bigga
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horlock said:It's pretty good that, enjoyed it. Do you write alot? I've just recently got into poetry not so long ago so i'm a bit of a rookie.
No, I don't write a lot. I'm as rookie as you(cheers,by the way!)!
That's my second poem in 20 years.
The first was 5 weeks ago!
Fame Monster
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Bigga said:horlock said:It's pretty good that, enjoyed it. Do you write alot? I've just recently got into poetry not so long ago so i'm a bit of a rookie.
No, I don't write a lot. I'm as rookie as you(cheers,by the way!)!
That's my second poem in 20 years.
The first was 5 weeks ago!
Much better than your first.
In fact, I thought it was excellent. A strange yet captivating use of personification.
Bigga
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nashark said:Bigga said:No, I don't write a lot. I'm as rookie as you(cheers,by the way!)!
That's my second poem in 20 years.
The first was 5 weeks ago!
Much better than your first.
In fact, I thought it was excellent. A strange yet captivating use of personification.
Cheers, Nas!
It does have many many layers to it and it's first draft. Believe it or not, I was trying to capture being a City fan and being accepted as part of that 'body' that is One. The rest moves into darker territory when away from the 'body'. It's all set in reflective mood.
Toying with "Bathing in Rain" as a title as opposed to "Halcyon Days".