An exciting, defining summer ahead

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  1. Lucky Toma

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  2. talkativesprout

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    A kettle makes a clunk when placed on a stove, it is the boiling water vapour that hisses....Pffft The Sun awaits you ;)




    Good article mate, wets the tastebuds :)
     
  3. aguero93:20

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    I thought the very end;
    Could have used a comma:

    Apart from that it was good...
     
  4. Armaan

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    Let's not pretend like we weren't saying the same thing last summer lol.
     
  5. domalino

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    Should there not be a second comma?

     
  6. aguero93:20

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    Not with 'and' after it. You could phrase it like this;

     
  7. CharliesRightPeg

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    Nice article
     
  8. Ladybarn Blue .

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    Very good , well said .
     
  9. Ladybarn Blue .

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    Well said .
     
  10. Uwe Already

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    You missed this bit at the end:

     

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