Not bad, Eddie.
Just a little advice... The music has the intention and works for the second half, but the first half needs the black fade and text shortening to bring the impact through better. It just seems to lag a little in tempo to the music. Maybe a cross fade or two will impact better? Just a tweak here and there.
I do a little myself so just experiment with it and do different versions before deciding what to put out..
Other than that... It's rockin', chum!!