The house that Roberto built.

Bloody hell guys!! Who do you support?

That is a good, very POSITIVE article about MCFC being on a good track with Mancini on head of it. WHAT do you mind so much about it?? Grammatical mistakes? Well, for God's sake, correct them, make them bold, underline, do anything constructive and show your "superior intelligence" and knowledge instead of just flaming anyone who gives it a shot! Can you write better?? Please, enlighten us and show us how it's being done! PLEASE!

Or shut up and give a man credit that he deserved!

Well done mate!
 
How do you want it reviewed?

As a post on here it's fine. Nothing in there we haven't heard before.

As a journalist's submission it's not very good. Doesn't grab me and I only read it as it was posted in here - had it been on SSN or in a paper I'd have lost interest before I got to the end.

Makes you realise that journalism - quality stuff not Sun/Star/Sport ;-) - isn't as eay as it looks.
 

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