how was your day?

[Deleted member 13905]

Have you written other poetry?

no, but i like cumbia...

 

[bluebc]

you can't just drop that in and leave it there.

Nothing too exciting , as I said I was with the missus.
20 year old lost her friends in Bolton and was skint at end of the night.
Tried to find her ex boyfriends in farnworth , got lost and sat in bus stop crying

 

[SkyBlueFlux]

When I first saw the OP I thought it was written in iambic pentameter, expecting something akin to Homeric epic.

Then I read on to find it's about knob rot. Bluemoon can be surprisingly post-modern at times.

My day was good though...

 

[idahoblues]

The day is still young, skied for an hour or two, worked for an hour or two and now feeling thirsty

 

[Deleted member 13905]

When I first saw the OP I thought it was written in iambic pentameter, expecting something akin to Homeric epic.

Then I read on to find it's about knob rot. Bluemoon can be surprisingly post-modern at times.

My day was good though...

they are pretty much the same thing, aren't they.

 

[Deleted member 13905]

not strictly cumbian style music but very close...

 

[SkyBlueFlux]

they are pretty much the same thing, aren't they.

Yes, stick it through a few different translators and you're basically correct.

 

[Bill Walker]

Have you written other poetry?

Haha you beat me to it. Our resident poet lauriat calum down and his latest work..

"We talked about my dick for a while"

Outstanding once again :)

 

[Blue Mist]

How's little Calum today ?

I'm surprised to see that nobody has yet mentioned the best cure for Thrush is Napoleon Solo.

 

[kaz7]

A smear test is painful.

The metal speculum would have every man on here crying lol